Kazure's manga / #confusion(100)

plot all over the place, im not entirely sure what happened with his fam

too rushed

let's mention this author and randomly put you in that world, now both of you shared a dream but wait! the author had the same dream too! since we have tension, let's randomly introduce this mangaka who assaults the uke and never talk about it again the end. all over the place

execution was kinda all over the place, i even got confused in the first chapter during their reunion lol didn't know that was the seme