Personally, I was annoyed at the flow of the story. I just scroll down without reading the text for maybe 10-20 chapters(?) It's because it's supposed to be unpredictable but suddenly predictable.. When you already discovered how the story flows, sometimes you will became impatient like.. "hurry up u shit" And I felt that all the time! And maybe because the misunderstanding that took many chapters.. I felt irritated. Lastly, I hope that maybe the ending will be satisfying, but haha not enough.. I'm so sorry :)
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