Teiress's manga / #oneshot(204)

they don't go into much details, the characters are NOT like they were in the game* Sweet Pool so their reactions & expressions are kind of a mesh (mostly entirely wrong). but it would've been nice if there was more to this story...or just a little bit more consistency

amateur smut script for the last 5-ish pages--not bad--would change "penis" to "dick/cock" & take out "anus" entirely. it's unflattering to the erotic illusion the short-story draws on.

lacking something, but nothing directly wrong with it. the sex scene wasn't quite "erotic" like what seems to have been intended since it deliberately excludes the points of intimacy...at least it's one of the few where it shows they have sex?

nekoXmermaid. unfinished ending.

"disappointing." rather shocking this actually made it into a book. it's a physical relationship explicitly, (not great depiction) where harry's an A-hole to draco up until the end where he's thinking* about being honest about his feeling for once but doesn't say anything remotely pleasant out loud to draco. & the art kinda gives pedo vibes the way draco gets drawn

the end didn't make much sense. are they a couple or are they trying to become a couple after harry was a shithead to draco in the previous book. it completely jumped over any reconciliation-type scene they might've had but there's still something there

what the shit is this. there's like no plot, no story. just ranting words & images. nothing fits in as a story. there's no meaning to it or anything. RE-read: okay. There's a vague kind-of plot in there. somehow? but it's like an incomplete thought. & the art is amateur.

not a full storyline/plot: she liked her then, she did nothing, 10yrs later they were coworkers & fucked in a hotel