Teiress's manga / #oneshot(204)

slutty. disappointment. shit translation or shit dialogue in general? utter bullshit. These are the feelings I had for this piece.

out of order. lacks continuity between panels.

hypnosis by an inferior fat fuck of a MOB character on a fem-male character for fuck-him-out-of-his-brains purposes. annoying.

THANKS FOR NOT MAKIN DEKU INTO A BITCH!

TODOROKI IS NOT A CHILD. DEKU DOES NOT HAVE A MONSTER COCK BIGGER THAN HIS OWN FUCKING LEGS. EVERYONE IN THE FUCKING ROOM WOULD HAVE WOKEN UP WITH ALL THOSE SCREAM-MOANS!!!!!! THIS IS WHY I SUPPORT BAKU X DEKU!! AT LEAST THAT SHIT STAYS (mostly) WITHIN THE LIMITS OF POSSIBILITY!!!!!

beautiful & sad short story. +the flower dies

unfortunate. they could've done a spin towards romance or something more sentimental, but chose to make it a horror-twist end. the octopus-man eats the mermaid.

they made Naruto into a whiny bitch. the story was missing pieces. not great.

salesmanXbutler. weird story. jumped around but also straight to the point??? it made no sense.

it would be "cute" if only the art wasn't so definitively amateur. it's not bad per se but it lacks general detail...too much negative/unused space for a black & white oneshot.