MightyTurkey's manga / #Drama(13)

Nice to see some real character development, gracius goodness, even the ending is ok

Clumsly gimmick is fucking annoyng, i hope this ends soon

God fucking dammit, this crap was SO close to beeing good but NO, you have to completely go all over the place with the bootcamp, PTSD, and drama, come on that shit is no secret you can learn it on google, fucking hell

sooo by the numbers, art is good

What a slow burn, so this isn’t an easy one, the writing had ups and downs, the starting point of the plot wasn’t very promising, but as they say “stick with the plan” it start to deliver a lot more going on, tho, the plot was slightly unfocused at times, nothing to bad but maybe with this experience the author will do better, worst part of all is the art, very inconsistent, and at times straight up bad, an assistant doing the backgrounds would be a lot of help. So what can I say? Try to give this a read it was worth for me, I dunno for you

Pretty art, so the plot and the delivery are kinda messy, like how did we start from a sexdoll with the birth of a baby?

crazy lesbians go brrr

Broken person going around breaking people

This is such a mess, the incipit was kinda interesting but the pacing is all over the place, the girls behave in a totally unrealistic way and everithing is so unecesarilly edgy, much wasted