cookiesformyself's manga / #S&M(8)

First story: would appreciate it if there was more from it like a back story why the seme started its fascination with breathplay and all. Plus the uke seems suspicious so maybe more from it also. Second story: I feel like there’s lacking it in like. What happened when he told the friend? Any reactions? And they just went on just like that after the uke and the friend broke it off? Overall: the plot needs to be deepen