soultwins's manga / #ichikawa kei(3)

this was really interesting! for such a short story, i already got so intrigued like wow? would have liked if there was more but just this is actually good enough too bc it won't really leave you hanging however, it'll leave your interest piqued

ok as a "kind of" writer, this is just So good??? like the use of all those metaphors make this really interesting in the sense where what the glasses guy is feeling seems so poetic... yeah, idrk if y'all can understand what i'm saying lol but this really feels like a beautiful poem :)

ok but i don't really care about their bedroom positions like i honestly just came here for their relationship lol (also, i think it was just okay anyway) but yeah, this was really nice! what i liked most is the pacing, i'm so glad it wasn't fast paced and they took it one step at a time. like they don't know each other so it's only natural that they should know more about each other first before going into a relationship, ya kno? cause i think its really unrealistic to suddenly confess and start dating with someone you barely know. it's good to see that they took it slow which made it more realistic. this was really nice!