sinjin drowning's manga / #sweet(117)

This was sooo short. Also for some reason my dumbass didn’t understand what was going on the whole time . LIKE I DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPENED LIKE UEAH THEY GOT TOGETHER BUT???? WAHHH WHY AM I SO DUMB BYE 4.4/10

omg, what a lovely way to start the year of our lord 2021. There's a reason why I keep coming back to this genre. Idk, it's too wholesome! too sweet!! and just the whole thing felt like a warm hug, what a kind story. I hope to support the author asap, they're incredible. I would give up a kidney for a sequel i swear. BRO THIS WAS FUCKINF GOOD AS SHIT. I FUCKING LOBED FHIS. I DONT KNOW WHY. BUT LIKE AS SOON AS I READ THE FIRST CHAPTER OR TWO I CAN IMMEDIATELY TELLL THAT IM GOING TO LIKE THE STORY AND THIS IS WHAT HAPPEEND WIT THIS ONE. THIS WAS SOOOO CUTE. PLS I WANT ONE WOTJ THEM BEING OLDER OMG SOBBING JUST FREAKING RE-READ THIS AND I WISHED KT WAS LONGER IM SK SAD. THEY EERE SO CUTE. THERE WAS ABSOLUTELY NO DRAMA WHAT SO EVER. I LOCED THEM SO SO SO MUCH. THEH DESERVE EVERYTHING [cry] 20/10

not his fap material️LMFOSOSOO but OKAYG UM I LIKED FHIS. I WOULDNT SAY I LOVED IT BUT KT WAS BETTER THAN THE PAST FEW ONES JVE READ. AND OMFGGG when he said he had a lover and the guy was there like

I didn't really like the mom I know she tried but she should n't of let her son where would he wanted to just because he's gay doesn't mean he wanted to wear skirt like that was wrong for her to decide just cuz she thought she knew her son now look he's going out there and getting grope and stuff. BITCHHHHH IM LITERALLY CRUING . THIS WAS SOO BEAUTIFUL . I LOCED FHIS SOO SO MUCH. SOMETHING ABOUT IT OMFGGF. THERE WAS REALLY NO DRAMA AND OT WAS LIKE A SLOW BUTNING TYPE OF LOVE AND THEY BOTH UNDERSTOOD EACH OTHER. LIKE HE KNEW THUNGS LIKE J DONT KNOW HOW TO EXPLAING IT BUT OMFGGG I WISH THIS WAS LONGER IM SO SAD. LITERALLY CRIED LCMAKZKKS 20/10

The art is this story is glorious. Gorgeous. Top notch. 10/10... But the pacing isn't quite right. The story jumps back and forth in time which breaks the flow. There are a lot of unnecessary flashbacks. I feel like you could reshuffle all the flashbacks into the correct chronological order and make a more cohesive story. I suspect this is entirely the fault of the publication schedule and editorial requests, and not necessarily an artistic choice made by the author ^from another comment. also the chapters were so shortI was reading it and I came to the authors note thingy and I was like huh???? and I was about to finish reading it. I liked it but it just went to fast and I really didn’t understand . like it kept going back and forth to the past and future so that got me confused but overall I liked it so 7.3/10

MAN THERES 15 CHAPTERS IN TOTAL BUT ONLY FIVE HERE . WAHHH PLS SOMEONE UPDATE . SOBS. Anyways from so far , of what I’ve read I really liked this . I mean it’s was alright but it was cute yk? ALSO I THOIHHT IT WAS ONLY 5 CHAPTERS SO I WAS LIKE AHH A CUTE SHORT STORY FULL COLOR BL MMMH! anyways the chapters In Korean and I think you have to buy them so man this is why I want to learn other languages , I mean Korean is so hard , like the characters and overall pronunciation

When the seme said he'd like the uke to learn to love himself and the he thanked the uke for coming to love him....i cried. PLS RHIS WAS SOOOO

um ngl i didnt understand nothing from this story. IDKKWHY GVYGSBGSB SORRY BUT UGH IDK. i didt really like it. 1.7/10

ummm I’m going to be honest I really didn’t like this. zhduxuushs I MEAN YEAH IT WAS CUTE BUT IT JUST WASNT MY CUP OF TEA YK?? but I really did enjoy it and I liked how short and cute it was . but it just didn’t hit yk?and omfg I thought it was going to be an unrequited love thank god it wasn’t but yeah this was cute but just not to my liking 4.4/10

THIS WAS CUTE AND SHORT. I love how it was almost like a one shot in a way bc of how short it was ?? like I enjoy fast stories. kinda glad it wasn’t angst. also love how a 45 chapter story was cut into 3. And what I mean is that usually a story like this takes at least a few chapters so I’m glad that the character did it fast. BUT I WOILDVE LIKED SOME JEALOUSY ️Other than that I liked this 5.5/10