sinjin drowning's manga / #convenience store(1)

The art is this story is glorious. Gorgeous. Top notch. 10/10... But the pacing isn't quite right. The story jumps back and forth in time which breaks the flow. There are a lot of unnecessary flashbacks. I feel like you could reshuffle all the flashbacks into the correct chronological order and make a more cohesive story. I suspect this is entirely the fault of the publication schedule and editorial requests, and not necessarily an artistic choice made by the author ^from another comment. also the chapters were so shortI was reading it and I came to the authors note thingy and I was like huh???? and I was about to finish reading it. I liked it but it just went to fast and I really didn’t understand . like it kept going back and forth to the past and future so that got me confused but overall I liked it so 7.3/10