While I absolutely adore the story and overall flow and just how nicely written the characters are...I DO have a few issues here and there.
(( VERY rough mention of exactly 1 plot point. Nothing else can be tagged as spoiler, really. ))
Some things felt like they came out of left field, as if they SHOULD HAVE been mentioned but simply weren't (even if they were important, like the leaving the organization thing?? that's an important character dev point, it's really not good to just skip over that and mention it on the side later on when it already happened). It throws you off pace and makes things feel a little less immersive than it could be if you had mentioned it before as it happened/was about to happen. It IS a huge step after all.
Also...the ending felt quite a bit rushed (as did the confession-first time situation, but anyway). It feels a bit unfinished, like they wanted to get it done and over with real quick, you know? There's just that satisfying endgame feeling that was missing. It's a bit disappointing tbh.
Other than that this is a really good read and I can easily recommend it.
^i got that from a comment but yeah . this was such a good story and it had great development , and I love that they loved each other . and the attempt r@pe scene was not necessary :( it could’ve gave a great fellow but also this felt so short . there were so many plot holes ??? and the ending was so rushed and didn’t make sense ?? and then there was like a few panels where the friend was talking so I was like huh?? but yeah I enjoyed this
6.7/10
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