Ngl author tried to add plot but it was messy and hard to understand
Characters are cringe af esp Tasara like who tf be saying all that edgelord stuff; we also do not need to see Nara say I love you ten thousand times
author needs to do more showing and not telling when it comes to the love aspect
if you really want to make a historical bl with angst and unrivaled romance, do interesting arcs where the characters demonstrate their love for each other through sacrifices and loyalty instead of throwing in the words i love you every three panels
We did not need sex scenes every two chapters esp if the author was trying make good plot
Authors def got an ass eating fetish cuz like…
Where the Wind Stays