erm...'s manga / #Cringe(2)

Ngl author tried to add plot but it was messy and hard to understand Characters are cringe af esp Tasara like who tf be saying all that edgelord stuff; we also do not need to see Nara say I love you ten thousand times author needs to do more showing and not telling when it comes to the love aspect if you really want to make a historical bl with angst and unrivaled romance, do interesting arcs where the characters demonstrate their love for each other through sacrifices and loyalty instead of throwing in the words i love you every three panels We did not need sex scenes every two chapters esp if the author was trying make good plot Authors def got an ass eating fetish cuz like…

so shit the mc is an idiot and acts so childish and is literally so slow-witted and annoying asf ml has no basis for falling in love with the mc other than the fact they hooked up and met through the accident which makes no sense in real life. i know this is just "fantasy" and what not, but the level of delusionalness (idk if that a word) and insanity these bl webtoons are getting to are insane. this omegaverse shit is also dumb asf like try to make characters likeable for once and not so shallow and one dimensional. i had to force myself to finish this and i regret it so much cringe, annoying, and stupid asf idk how people can even like shit like this author just knows how to satisfy the desires of readers and knows nothing about crafting a well written story, but what did i expect: this webtoon is set in the damn omegaverse like tf ok and chapter 38 when he literally litters and throws away his shoes like so that's fucking cringe what's even the point??? if you want to make me sad why don't you actually develop the story revolving around his mental health after his parent's deathes and the death of his child like we didn't even see him show any signs of remorse and all the sudden he's at the bridge again and left the ml. like is this about bipolar disorder or depression?? like ok if you're going to make the mc have both fine but like it's obv you're going for depression so make it make sense ok so he dropped the shoes for closure and to let go of his past, but like come on, did you really have to throw those fucking shoes in? the amount of environmental damage people have caused is already enough and you did not have to do that dumbass mc is actually stupid and has no regard for his child whatsoever. doctor said he can't have sex because of the baby and his dumbass is always trying something