erm...'s manga / #Cliché(3)

Mid

could satisfy a lot of BL readers but just looking at it's plot, character depth, and the amount of BL cliches used, it's not exactly the best or award worthy... in the creator's note from the author she said she didn't take too long for the story outline and yeah... you can tell way too many bl cliches used, but maybe i am just thinking thus because i read the creator's note that showed all of the character descriptions like come on, a top that is a manager, straight, unrealistically possesive, wants to make his lover not work and instead stay home, and obsessed from the start. istg these authors be pulling out EVERY SINGLE DAMN CLICHE LIKE GIVE US NEW STUFF. they always use the excuse of it's a "bl fantasy world" this is another work i think i would enjoy more if i read it back then in short, this can be a satisfying read for some (maybe most) bl readers but it isn't exactly the best and unique. there are so many other stories out there that probably have a very similar plot or characters to this could really be considered boring but that's just my opinion i don't think i will remember this one: not exactly a memorable story

so shit the mc is an idiot and acts so childish and is literally so slow-witted and annoying asf ml has no basis for falling in love with the mc other than the fact they hooked up and met through the accident which makes no sense in real life. i know this is just "fantasy" and what not, but the level of delusionalness (idk if that a word) and insanity these bl webtoons are getting to are insane. this omegaverse shit is also dumb asf like try to make characters likeable for once and not so shallow and one dimensional. i had to force myself to finish this and i regret it so much cringe, annoying, and stupid asf idk how people can even like shit like this author just knows how to satisfy the desires of readers and knows nothing about crafting a well written story, but what did i expect: this webtoon is set in the damn omegaverse like tf ok and chapter 38 when he literally litters and throws away his shoes like so that's fucking cringe what's even the point??? if you want to make me sad why don't you actually develop the story revolving around his mental health after his parent's deathes and the death of his child like we didn't even see him show any signs of remorse and all the sudden he's at the bridge again and left the ml. like is this about bipolar disorder or depression?? like ok if you're going to make the mc have both fine but like it's obv you're going for depression so make it make sense ok so he dropped the shoes for closure and to let go of his past, but like come on, did you really have to throw those fucking shoes in? the amount of environmental damage people have caused is already enough and you did not have to do that dumbass mc is actually stupid and has no regard for his child whatsoever. doctor said he can't have sex because of the baby and his dumbass is always trying something