tsukineko's manga / #oneshot(327)

Kind of... meh. Disappointing, even though I ship this pairing.

Can't remember much about this one, but I have the feeling that I found it just meh, though I liked the art, as usual, given that it's Yamane Amano.

Can't remember what I thought of this one.

Gross! Should come with a shota tag really. Even though he doesn't actually touch him until he's legal, he's still wanted to since he [the uke] was a small kid and he [the seme] was already an adult. He [the seme] was gorgeous, though, despite being a pedo. Edit: I just reread this because I didn't see that I'd already read it, and now I'm quite surprised to read this review of mine and to see how much I've changed since the first time reading the manga. In rl it would be gross, weird and wrong, but I'm starting to find this kind of thing sweet when it's in yaoi!! I'm changing the rating from 2 stars to 3.

2.5 stars. I like the scenario, but the way it's written and drawn feels really stilted and disjointed. Maybe sensei was going for a pared down, artsy feel, like flicking through some black & white photos or something, but imho she didn't really pull it off. Either that, or she was in a mega rush to meet the deadline and created it in 10 mins flat. Either way, it ended up feeling like just the bare bones of a story. As a result, as much as I like the scenario, (and also the little twist at the end), I couldn't really get into this. Minase Masara Sensei can do better.

It was too short, making the characters appear one dimensional, and the plot seem rushed. Good-looking guys, though hehe.