tsukineko's manga / #marriage proposal(2)

Sweet, but predictable af. I'm not sure it was best suited to the one shot format. More twists and turns and angst might have made it less predictable and sweet. Then again, it was probably supposed to be fluffy, not angsty.

This wasn't half bad, until Chris's secret was revealed and it all became sickly sweet and unrealistic - what a shame! There's one line in this that I love, though: 'I am your trigger. The bullet is within you. I will release you from him.' (ch.3, p7) - In fact, I like that whole scene a lot.