tsukineko's manga / #divorce(3)

2.5 stars. I like the scenario, but the way it's written and drawn feels really stilted and disjointed. Maybe sensei was going for a pared down, artsy feel, like flicking through some black & white photos or something, but imho she didn't really pull it off. Either that, or she was in a mega rush to meet the deadline and created it in 10 mins flat. Either way, it ended up feeling like just the bare bones of a story. As a result, as much as I like the scenario, (and also the little twist at the end), I couldn't really get into this. Minase Masara Sensei can do better.