Jeff and Terrance, these English names make it easy lol. Well, this story is incredibly tear-jerking. I did not expect all the physiological drama and inclusion of mental illness, but it was phenomal. The only thing are the plot holes, they never finished or calcified what happened/caused the initial accident. I love enemy to lover tropes , but this one was incredibly unique because of how grounded it was in depression/suicide. After chapters 50, my heart wailed with excitement nearly every chapter. My only advice was to also empahsis Jeff going through the mental strain of taking care of someone, mental illness goes away by that not that straightforward. Maybe it does tho, I dont know. But overall, it was a sweet but very painful story. Storyline - great. Art -great. Plot - amazing, with gaps. Dialogue - great. The figurative language is a bit stretching it tho, it was a bit confusing and not straightforward.
Cocoon of the Heart