Candy Man
Thirty chapters in. Honestly , this story is kind of garbage. It's a rip off of My Darling Signed up, but way worse. The overall pacing is pretty bad. First, the way the MC tried resolving and escaping from the issue was really bad. Then we see the MC's SO be super crazy possessive - psychopathic. There also isn't a concrete plot. The main plot was resolved about 15 to 20 chapters in, regarding the whole posing-as-girl-online trope. And now, its just the appearance of being overly possessive, or random external conflicts that just seems tiresome. Their immaturity at handling these conflicts is bad. I cant tell if I'm reading a story made by a 14 year old , or if it was intentionally thought out to look like it was made by a 14 year old. The character's resolve is incredibly fragile, their relationship too, and the development is not there. It is so badly paced. And I cant tell if the character is intentionally made to be possessive to fulfill that "seme-uke" trope, but regardless, I hate it. The transitional chapters between the numerous plots are superficial and lack depth and reasoning. Yandere with derdere. Storyline - interesting. Plots - ass. Art - so good ,but plot is so sad. Panel flow - okay. Storyflow - bad.
The Sound of Sugar Cubes
First off, this story has 2 too many psychos. One being Harold, that essentially terminated the MC's bestfriend's life cuz Harold was obsessed with the MC (Hanyul). Hanyul was way too forgiving with him too. Second, Weon, Hanyul 's boyfriend. Ummm....as cute as they both were...that dude is insane. Kidnapping and also, inferring ,killing? The storyline had a lot of potential but it most just revolved about their exploiting and abusive relationships. I feel that the singing career was implemented too superficially and wasn't a strong component. It could have been something else entirely, and it doesn't speak to the fame, attitude, or lifestyle of becoming a celebrity, which Hanyul is now. It really was just about how all 3 were misreading each other , exploiting each other, harassing, manipulating, and so forth. Storyline - okay. Plot - okay. Dialogue - not bad. Art - I wish it had better coloring. The art was kinda a turn off. Also, the titular aspect of the story wasn't apparent till the last chapter-- no.
A Strange Joke
Overall, this story was a fantastic read. All the characters were so well-developed , with such a strong backstory to understand their intent. Looking at the authors note, of the 5 unrequited love and growth of it, I will evaluate each as it corresponds to all the arcs. Arc 1. Min, Jina, and Sijun. This was quite the plot which showed the growth of Jina who experienced a fake relationship with Sijun. Overall, her overcoming of love for Sijun, though he was gay, made her a fabulous supporting character for thejr relationship and the plot. Only thing is I don't usually like these miscommunication plots. Arc 2. Love triangle with Min, Sijun, and Sehun. By far one of my favorite arcs because of Sehun's emotional turmoil, confession, and developmemt. I was incredibly sad after he was rejected. Arc 3. Sijun and Min. After chapters 40, we get a huge flashback of Sujin, his fuckboy past, and how he came to like Min. I found this incredibly sweet and they jumped quickly into a relationship. Of course with this relationship came the proceeding conflict of a collapsed love triangle with Sehun. I love how they were able to have all their relationships be resolved , but Sehun still needed justice. After that, he was tossed to the side. Arc 4. Love perseverance chapter 60+. This fact that this dude turned up made things go South with his appearance had me messed up. He became obsessed with Min cuz he regretted his actions as Min's ex. Of course, that didn't happened till the end of the story, so he instigated a bunch of shit. Thus the cycle of violence and trauma was passed from the professor, Mr. Shim to Min. Min became self conscious of himself , the relationship they had to keep hidden, and self-proclaimed burdens he had hid from Sijun. Thus, they broke up. How they got back together was rushed. I didnt like that. It needed more talking on resolve, but I guess for content sake, not everything needed to be reviewed cuz Min had already gone through all the emotional turmoil after they had broken up. As I read the story, the art just started to become better and better. Every part of this story had grasped my attention , except for the last arc that made me question the integrity and admiration of the MC. Of course it was drama filled ,but it was a great mixture of some cliches with some realistic relationship things. The art improved so much throughout the serious and I have always loved the writing. The panel flow is amazing , the storyline is simple and sweet. The plots are not all my favorite, but the author did a damn good job writing it.
My X report
The plot sucks. There wasn't exactly a climax to the story or a build up, so it felt like a dud. Tje romance was a nice aspect, but that's all that there was to it. I have to say that this story is lacking in many parts, especially engagement. I nearly dropped this story and I wasn't eager to finish it. Being a spy, but being an ass spy. Then the science lab is a sex toy lab. Weird. Storyline - bad. Plot - boring . Art - not bad at all. Dialogue - good. Panel flow - good.
Wild City
The tropes are incredibly strong with this story. Bunch of cliches that come one after another. First we got a lover who doesn't want to be with the MC cuz of homophobia. Then we have an enemies to lover situation and bunch of side villains. Then we have random characters showing up more and more. Then we have an actually antagonist. Interesting. It was actually a pretty good read. I didn't drop it at all. I really do like animal ears and tails on people....maybe thats lowkey a kink. Other than the characters itself and the romance, I didn't really care for the plot. Storyline - not bad. Plot - messy. Art - pretty good! Storyflow -- quite good. Dialogue - on point.
The Sound of Your Voice
Wow. Okay, this story is really just a story with romance. It is not a romance story at heart , but a story about the overcoming of a past through a screenplay. If I had to be honest , I loved the dynamic between the two characters. This story was so simple and so sweet. One, we have a simple, editor who is has been impacted by the voice acting industry. Second we have a voice actor who apparently had a connection to the main character's perservence when they were younger. The main plot is really about the screenplay and them trying to understand each other better and their interpersonal relationships. It starts off really slow , with the introduction of a bunch of side characters. It was actually a bit distracting to be honest. We also don't get to see one of the side characters, who apparently had a huge impact on the story itself, be explained and get enough "screentime". Ultimately , I love how the dynamic between Ethan and Jimmy, our mc's that slowly found love and interest in each other. Storyline - simple and sweet. Plot - not much , as it is mostly flashbacks + romance. Dialogue - amazing. The story has a lot of world building and content. It is does a great job at explaining trauma and how Ethan is still affected by it. Art - i love it for some character designs and art.
Hetakuso Love Step
My heart is absolutely amazed by this series. I love I love it I love it I love it. It makes me heart feels so warm , it's steamy, and it talks about a basic relationship between two people. It doesn't exaggerate the sex , it includes realistic realistic things like shopping, going to the movies, and all the such of a basic relationship. It helps normalize the love.
Hollow Lovers