Serious Joke
i dunno man. the second ending felt like a weird fanfic somebody decided to write about the two of them. sooo much drama. both stories just feel so non-cannon. it was a good story but awful execution. it had so much potential to be really good. but it wasn’t. like the second couple getting together felt do unsatisfying. it was so funky. i haven’t read the side stories yet but i’m not confident it will help this unease that i feel. i don’t necessarily regret reading this but it just needed to be waaaayyy shorter man. the length could be justified if i was gonna read a better version of this. but it was like pulling teeth man. i was just like oh my god. neither of you hate each other just get a fucking move on. they did the same thing like four times. also both couples didn’t have enough chemistry. i don’t think the author had enough experience drawing good chemistry. it was just like oo la la i like you because you’re nice to cats?? i like you because you don’t value me enough?? there wasn’t enough exigence to suffice their being the potential for a relationship to bloom. god it took me like five minutes to figure out the word suffice. anyway. basically, i need a better reason to root for these people. OH. AND WHAT WAS WITH SEUNGHA LIKING KIWOON???? that totally ruined the entire character for me. oh my god. and the author hinting at a throuple at the beginning of the second season. like fuck that. if a throuople is too much for you to write about in your high school bl story. then don’t fuckinng hint it bro :/ if you’re gonna hint throuople/love rivalry, then do it. gosh. i have a way more problems with this than i thought. but it’s not like i didn’t enjoy it or anything. i just feel like it could have executed better if the author had more experience. like the friend group had so much potential for wacky antics. and the second couple combo had the potential to actually be satisfying if you cut just a little bit of the angst. sooooo many opportunities to be good. but whatever. there are still side stories to consume. 6.01.23 -
Affectionately