ZeroSama's manga / #shounen ai(126)

Hmm interesting

Wow I didn't expect it to end immediately i feel like they can still make this story longer but anyways that's the author's decision TvT it's a good short story

This. . This is so effin helpful to me as a writer i ddint think much when writing something but i guess that is why my characters are too stiff i ddint understand their personality and actions. I didnt reasearch how things will flow or the direction of their path. It is also one of the reasons i cant portray the characters emotions too well feel their pain through words alone. goshhh ill make sure to improve myself Aja!!! ^^ i will try once more going back to writing a story~. Love the complexity but at the same time simplistic details of the story.

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