Donuts's manga / #Dropped(165)

ch.20 convenient coincidences r the only thing driving the plot. and the 4yo kid playing cupid. it has good vibes though. nice characters too.

ch9 not bad, but it feels amateurish. the expression of the characters seems stiff, and it flows kind of choppy from scene to scenes

ch5 wtf I thought Kai is a nice sweet guy but dang what an asshole he went after Hinata bcs he's curious? what is he trying to prove? that he's better at sex than his brother? lmao. and then he still has the nerve to get angry at the uke when the uke couldn't say that he's feeling good from sex. maybe his body feels the pleasure, but I'm sure as hell his heart is hurting. how dense can u be wtf

ch.6 it started pretty good. but I just can't stand how the seme choose to hurt uke by saying he has always hated and is sick of uke. he could've just easily say about the concerns they'll have as a public figure if they chose to continue the relationship. but ofc no, bcs there won't be enough drama in the story lol. However, the thing that I can't stand the most is how seme forced uke to have sex with him right after saying he hates uke. u're ending things anyway, why must u forced urself on him. that's just selfish. and I hate how even after that uke is the only one suffering and has to grovel begging for seme attention. really disappointed since the author is one of my fave

ch.15 Honestly the uke pisses me off. He brought this whole things onto himself. He's neither a good leader nor gangster. I understand the author is going for brainwashing theme and such, but there's no point in that when since the beginning, the uke never hate the seme for his betrayal anyway lmao. This just make him seem even more trashy. So much for the "loyalty above all"

ch12 naive uke

ch9

ch.60 it started okay ish.. the world is fcked up, literally no one stands on the side of omega, and ppl even celebrate the extinction of omega. but if that is the case, then why would they glorify alpha? since the author make it seems like only omega can conceive alpha, and beta can't sense any pheromones. it doesn't make sense. and as the chapters go, the ppl around seme who I initially thought has a rather okay personality starts to show their shitty colours. The secretary, Noel, who's actually responsible for the feeling developments between the main couple starts to look down on Rain for being an omega, when he's literally the one who keeps playing wingman for them at the start. wtf bro?? From what I can see so far, what Noel has for Gold is neither loyalty nor dedication. He's just accomplishing his own ambition through Gold, his wish to see Gold inheriting the presidency overtook Gold's own happiness. Besides Noel, both the doctor and Joshua are already portrayed as shitty character from the start so I don't have much to complain. What really ticks me off is how.. starting from ch59, the main couple are suddenly making up.. through phone sex?? when they are in the middle of a big fight, a fight about the sole main conflicts that start this whole series?? Well, that's still okay, but then the author decided to shove smutty scenes between Noel and Joshua, the main villain out of nowhere? And putting in "cute interactions" between them as an attempt to develop more of their characters. ma'am it doesn't work like that. seeing them act cute after all the hell they put Rain through just makes me gag. it won't make them any better as a character.

ch.3 just mediocre. not worth reading for the risk. the author is a bit cray cray

ch.4 cute concepts. poor execution. uke came off as dense and a pushover instead of kind. seme came off as manipulative.