Donuts's manga / #Dropped(165)

ch.5 weird developments

classic entitled western-styled mc

ch 11 real cliche. same vibe as ur usual shoujo manga. but i was okay with it until Shu disappeared when Rito regained his memory. I don't like how the author just glossed over the turbulence and conflicts in Jadeite when it happened. Both the author and the characters portrayed Rito and Shu as two completely different individual. But then suddenly they met in a dream and Shu gave his memory to Rito and then Rito = Shu?? This just feels so wrong. Just having someone's memory doesn't turn them into that someone.. And just a reminder that this all happened within the span of 1-2chapters. we can see how rushed things are towards the end

the art is good, but the story is not. I can clearly feel the immaturity of the younger seme. uke always ends up the one who has to make decisions and give in. seme is putting all the pressure and responsibilities to uke

ch. 9 uHhhh idk? not that bad but don't wanna waste my time on it

trash, entitled seem meets pushover uke

ch.22 their dynamic is really bothering me.. got into a huge fight bcs see didn't listen and almost got caught doing the deeds in public multiple times - repenting - making up and promised to not do that again - the next sex end up being in car in parking lot lmao begging uke for bj out of nowhere - keep insisting on it - they make a bet - seme wins - seem wanting the bj right away even tho uke is tired from all day long activities - waking up sleeping uke for bj

ch.5 cliched

ch.18 the seme is typical annoying alpha male. criticizes everyone when he himself needs to watch the way he acts. "macho righteous police officer". yeah right. I was hoping the badass uke would kick some sense into him and to see some change of attitude. But nah, i realized the author view the seme behavior as something cool. The author keeps trying to paint seme in a good light when really, he's not. he's inconsiderate, judging, self righteous, and narcissist. their banter doesn't put me in a good mood. it's always just seme looking down, threatening, and telling uke how he should act. reading this put me in a foul mood. the story itself is pretty good. the seme is just a big no.

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