Hmmm I liked how the story goes a bit. It was a bit fast phased hehe but it would be good to mellow it down a bit for some parts. But I guess it was that phase that made the story charming. Ooohhh it would be also good to have sex scenes hahaha I feel like the Seme has a pent up frustration hahaha not like I know what the author's pent up frustration that is. Just saying though :D (or I'm the one who is frustrated???) anyway it is a good read :) yey for the chapters! Kudos to the artist!!! Weeeyaaaawt
At the End of the Road