Whinnie's manga / #Full Color(223)

It’s honestly not as bad as people say it is. God, people gotta stop being so critical. I personally think that the sims part wasn’t bad, I thought it looked cool at certain times haha. The author tried something, and that is applaudable. Like, if you wanna make a comic but don’t know if you’ll be able to draw it all the time, then this is a perfectly normal option, like??? Anyway, I think it was the plot and length for me. I’m really picky and honestly a brat when it comes to story, so it really isn’t the authors fault a lot of the time. Anyway, my only criticism is dialogue flow, otherwise it is a perfectly normal sounding first comic (i’m guessing)! Imm sure you (the author) will have amazing projects in the future, don’t let people bring you down cause they wanna shit about the sims art. Toodles and have a nice day~ EDIT: It’s ongoing :) lolol