aoko's manga / #2 ⭐(33)

this is ridiculous and the only reason it’s in my wtr at all is because of the many tiktoks of people fixing the art (hilarious) out of its many issues one that really bothered me is the gaslighting—trust, there are others that have way worse ml/plot lines but at the very least the gaslighting isn’t glorified and seen as hot (written to be) especially when this “gaslighting” is so terribly written like omg

they were so toxic for each other it was actually scary, but they actually semi communicated.. sorta; this makes me feel some type of way bc not only is it tragic it’s also weird seeing the ml have feelings for her 14 year old self; and after all that… be so fr rn, why don’t they get a happy ending, bullshit

y/n x mafia boss manga ver. the thing is… she’s a very good person, she cares about her friends and has a strong character, but she’s doing a lot of these good things FOR a man!! like girl, be your own person omg like her friends aren’t still slaves right???

bffr… the miscommunications are such a turn off along with the art; how are you going to make “pearl boy” have god tier art and give me this canvas webtoon shit, also this author has a kink for time skips like bruh

does “silent maru” only know to draw one body type??? nothing against them but the stories they’ve worked on feel so much like a fan fiction (cringed sm reading this ngl) the best way to describe this story is if “high school musical” met “ginny and georgia” OH MY GOD BASED ON THE WATTPAD NOVEL

this is a rollercoaster, it’s insane how one town can have so many unstable people the plot is gone..

UGH THIS WAS SUCH A WASTE OF MY TIME ️️️ are you fucking serious. how does this have a 9.1 rating. it’s actual dogwater. “you kidnapped me, raped me, and broke me, yet my heart sill yearns for you!” … *spongebob horn* brotha eughhhh

look man. all for age gap relationships, especially when the guy is a responsible adult — and bro is! it’s just.. literally nothing happens? you have a premise and four chapters? do something with it instead of just writing basic “girl likes guy.. but wait! guy is old!”

smut

WASTE OF MY DAMN TIME!!! everything about this is so mid it actually hurts… to have semi-interesting characters (my friend’s oc’s are more entertaining) is fine, you just had so many opportunities and you squandered it with a dumbass love triangle and incest