Arila's manga / #Demon King(8)

Ch 48 It says harem but it’s just because there are a lot of girls around the mc but it’s not really a sexual thing it’s mostly just family. I think it’s really good and original. I can’t wait for more.

Ch 31 Really good and funny honestly, ignore ecchi tag it really isn’t. Really good so far and has great potential, I just hope it keeps it up.

Ch 86 Huge plot twists later on, so basically Yoon Suah is actually the author. She started making changes to the story based on readers wishes which is what kept causing the story to repeat in a way. However the story and characters had a certain amount of sentience. Maize, Syukar, and Yse knew the story kept repeating. Yse always knew, Syukar only knows when Maise remembers. However some deleted characters, the fates didn’t want to be deleted, they were slowly stealing the powers of the three and manipulated them with it with no remorse so they could write themselves back into the story. However this story line was Yoon Suah testing them. The life before this she somehow entered the world and first met the alchemist guy but I think she started to learn how things were going wrong and despite writing her characters one way they were totally different because of the temptation and interference by the fates. Such as Syukar abusing Maise, Maise wanted to release Yse from his cycle of dying and would often save him but then in a fit of jealousy Sycuar would still kill Yse and Maise would be stuck with him all over again, remember, and then Sycuar would abuse her for choosing Yse over him once she remembered and then beg for her forgiveness. So Maise met Yoon Suah and revealed to her what Sycuar had been doing this time, he never fought the fates temptation like Yse and Maise just because he wanted to cling to Maise. So Yoon Suah gave Maise part of her power to change fate so that the fates couldn’t touch her while accidentally inserting some of her memories unintentionally. Yoon Suah restarted the timeline with this in effect erasing her existence from the world so she could see through Maise’s eyes what was going on. When the fates finally continued to fuck up and hurt Maise she took over Maise’s body using the energy that she left with her to completely delete the character who decided not to changer her ways in her test of them. Part of their test was Lilith, the authors self insert she had to place for this timeline so she could watch through Maise’s eyes, she had no memory of the life she lived as Yoon Suah but still held the things she learned from her time with the Alchemist, but she was an empty shell without Yoon Suah so the fates treated her like a toy probably in place of Yoon Suah and manipulated her existence, such as erasing her own and the alchemist’s memories of her besides what was useful to them. The alchemist remembered at the end when he saw Lilith’s body and his self inflicted curse lifted, he attacked the fates but was fighting a loosing battle where I believe the fates were going to attack Maise again before Yoon Suah came back but Sycuar actually cut the strings of the fates with his full power returned due to their manipulation. I can’t tell if he’s trying to repent for what he’s done or not because he’s staying silent at the moment, but I look forward to what happens next. Yoon Suah said she was going to the place of the fates, so I’m not sure exactly what she meant by that but apparently the timeline won’t repeat again and Maise can actually visit her. I was right about Lilith being Soo Ah’s self insert, she created Lilith so she’d have a body who could age. Because her original body is unaffected by anything in that world. While I didn’t like it at first because of the slow burn yet hasty decisions of their relationship (some things were dragging out for too long and then suddenly everything was rushed back and forth, but pacing gets better later), it’s now very interesting. I like how it’s a novel trying to right itself just because the heroine is changing the story.

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