July's manga / #Smut(91)

Hmmmm. The art is nice, but it feels wrong somehow. It's probably because the characters don't look like themselves, so it doesn't feel like this is what they're trying to pass of as. Also, there was barely any smut in the R18 scene, so that was pointless. The relationship between the two characters is also vague and doesn't settle right with me.

Well, some of the smut scenes were nice, but the flow of the panels between the confrontation and the sex was super wonky. It didn't make any sense to me. The establishment of the relationship of Lancelot and Gilgamesh was poorly done, it might as well not have been included. It also seems the chronology is off too, because one moment they'd be fighting and the next page, it's a smut scene, and then they're fighting again. Passage of time is unclear. Art is good, pity this didn't execute the entire thing as well as it could have done.

The best part of this doujinshi is the reflection of Gilgamesh and Enkidu's relationship, and how it affects him to this day. The smut was unnecessary, and not drawn well, in any case. The art was a tiny bit below average, but the characters look mostly right. Slightly better doujinshi than the others that I have read, but it's not the best.

I don't know, this doujinshi was just mediocre. The art wasn't good, with the exception of the extreme close-ups of Gilgamesh's face. The relationship between the Master and Gilgamesh was weird, I can't figure it out. Gilgamesh is somewhat bipolar here, he'd be scolding the Master and then blushing like a schoolgirl in the next panel, which is off-putting. All-around strange. Smut scene was terrible, might as well not have included it.

Art was definitely below average for this doujinshi, the characters look off. Smut scene was barely existent. I don't like the relationship between Kirei and Gilgamesh. Is he manipulating him to love him? Or does he really love him? Who knows? Tries to be poetic, but just falls flat. Can't really take this seriously for what it wants to be.

Tiny Gilgamesh is cute. Everything else about this doujinshi was bad though. Art was meh, smut was barely there. I wished Gilgamesh stayed tiny...

I liked it. Great smut. Tentacles galore.

The smut was passable actually, I'm surprised since the art was pretty below par. The characters barely look like what they're supposed to look like, although there's a faint resemblance. I didn't care for Kirei's point of view, because it was draggy and didn't add to the story as a whole.

Typical blackmail and Stockholm syndrome after being raped, but throw some exhibitionism in there too, and that's the gist of this manga. The mangaka really loves his shotas, every single one of his works has one or two. The smut was somewhat average, but the art was not that great. I didn't really care for this at all. Nothing new, and it's not that steamy in terms of the smut either.

It's one of the better works by this mangaka, there's actual some plot development instead of his usual "shota gets raped, then gangbanged, then mindbroken" pattern. The art is also one of the better ones in his many works, but the smut is still so-so to decent. The ending is open-ended, although it's happy for once. Usually he likes to end his stories with the main character completely broken and becoming a crazy slut because of too much sex. However, it's not that great overall, I feel like something is just lacking. There's no heart in this, or any creativity with the smut or story in general. I'm just not that impressed.