Rei-san's manga / #fighting(8)

i wrote a novel story line from this , search it in the purple notebook

i would accept ANYONE to be the partner of artsina EXECPT THE PRINCE! he's the WORST character i have ever encountered till this day!! frankly, i'm rooting for sir carisein ( red haired boy ) after excluding allindes ( green haired boy ) who didn't believe tia. note: it's a damn tragedy story at the beginning when tia's father showed her concern for the first time then ended up being killed TT^TT ( tia's father is absolutely my favorite character!! <333333333333333 ) true cooments: 1- Prince: Why are you making that face in front of me? My ideal version of Tia: Because I resent you. I resent you so much that I wouldn't mind burning up in hell as long as I can drag you with me. 2- You just have to re-read the first 10 chapters and you know.... (He has to have a HUGE and I mean GIGANTIC character development in order to be forgiven...otherwise I'd be dissappointed from Tia) 3-(╯°Д °)╯╧╧ slap that foolish mf with blueberry head on the face . ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ Pfft- Blueberry head xD 4- Now i know This prince like a girl acts hard-to-get No wonder he was fallen for jieun ( she didnt love him at first ) and despise tia cause being transparent about her feelings ╮(￣▽￣)╭ 5- Guys it’s impossible she should literally not end up with the prince again like that’s some bullshit that’s some domestic abuser-abusee shit right there. Yes we’re back in time and the prince isn’t like that (yet?) and none of those events have occurred but like he’s abused her, raped her, like caused her to have a miscarriage, killed her dad then killed her!!!!?! There is no redemption for that because she has fuckjng PTSD from It trauma like that easily doesn’t go away. 6- I'm not taking Allen's side but let's be real guys, if you were in Allen's shoe you would also think the same as him. Just saying tho 7- me to the green boy after chapter 42 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIzVCwhHcWc 8- I think I'm the only one who ships Tia to the Red Hair Kid, I mean dude he's not your ideal man but he's cute and can make Tia happy ╮(￣▽￣)╭ GO RED KID! GO SEXY SEXY LOVE (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ 9- How to be a creepy dad Step 1 learn to make this face http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/the_abandoned_empress/nto/to_chapter-48/15/ ^^^^^^^^^ learn to make this face (⊙…⊙ ) 10- Finally some time with Carsein. And to everyone saying the prince is fine mmmm but would u want to be with someone who's capable of being that fucked up. He raped her (as well as cheated on the person he claimed to really love) in a public space (from what I rmr) she ended up pregnant and he did nothing when she was suffering and lost the kid (tbh i don't rmr anything about her other life than how shitty they both were to her). It doesn't matter if he doesn't have feelings for her this time but the fact that hes capable to do that to ANYONE is a problem. He "loved" the new girl from last time too. Did it make him better? Oh he's changed blahblah bruh I wouldn't want to look at someone who did that to me. It's not a dream it happened and I would not give that person another chance who knows what he may end up doing. 11- seriously, i live for the adorable love between tia and her household. the knights, maids, and her pops doting on her is the cutest fucking thing. also, allen is 100% gonna turn out to be a conniving snake and istg if the prince and tia somehow get together i will actually scream. he's an immature brat. he didn't give a shit about her miscarraige and had the audacity to make her go on her hands and knees and lick his shoe to beg for her father's forgiveness before telling her her dad's fucking dead. like fuck you, doesn't matter if you're bitter or jealous that tia was praised more than you. i hate him 12- i just wanna see the dad again and i also wanna see more of red :'D 13- tbh i dont rly mind who tia ends up together with among the three boys. allen seems shady but hasnt actually gone against her as of now / hes been by her side all this time. although him no believing her seems to have caused some damage the prince hasnt done anything remotely bad in this life. i can totally understand why tia is terrified of him and would rather avoid him altogether but i see him as a different character than his past life hA.. and the redhaired is my favorite even though i dont remember his name LMAO The best part of this story though, is the focus on her relationship with her father and the people of her house. If i had to choose tia's future i'd rather her stay in the house than marry one of the boys. I'll probably enjoy whatever route the author decides to go with as long as it is convincing. Ahahaha Carsein best boy And I agree I love her relationship with her father and people now. 14- Carsein is an idiot but i like him better than the twoヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~, since he gives the lightness this manga desperately (or manhwa??) needs (●'◡'●)ﾉ...its getting a bit too heavy now~ 15- I don't think villainess reincarnations focus on these kinds of things enough. The mass psychological damage that they experienced after being killed by the person that they loved... the stress and desperation to stay far away from them... and the lingering painful words cannot always be erased with new memories. anyways, she can't truly heal her invisible wounds until MR. DICK PRINCE SHAPES THE FUCK UP AND CONSOLS HER WITH PATIENCE AND COMPASSION INSTEAD OF INTIMIDATION AND THREATS. Exactly!!!! Actually, Allen is doing this, but we're not satisfied with him because he's clearly just using her And the prince really does need to shape up. Otherwise, the readers will just hate him for all eternity. This manga will be known as "the one that triggered everyone who read it" True true. Although Allen and Tia are friends, I can't shake this ominous feeling of him. It's like he's always calculating every situation and bending them for his own benefit. Ah.. the prince is seriously on a whole new level on my hate list. I hope he matures nicely soon so this tension between him and the readers soon blows off (￣∇￣") Allen is definitely doing this. On chap 50, he says this: "Yes, this is fine. We can start over. And this time, it will be perfect." It's not really something you say when you just made up with a friend. Not to mention, maybe the author didn't do this on purpose, but Allen is in a dark room, and there's no genuine feeling in this smile when he reads the letter. This kinda gives the reader the feeling of uneasiness and fakeness from Allen. Sorry, my inner theorist just popped out (￣∇￣")(≧∀≦) no need to apologize! i love the theory, especially that dark room. It represents how his true self it actually hidden beneath his words! I honestly feel like he's a hidden sadist (⊙…⊙ ) 16- he needed to shout at Tia? If he wants to take care of Tia, why you need to be rude, potato head? And She needs to change her mentality, attitude and focus in her new life (?). Then KICKS Jieun’s ass and all this fUcKiNg people. (Except her dad and Carsein). Allendis is sweet and little bit psycho, I want to re-re-retract his behavior . 17- Owhh my poor ipad. Im so sorryyy for punching you.. That prince.. 2 word. FUCK OFF!!!!! 18- This is why I'm forever on Team Papa Me too and I feel so sorry for her!(╥﹏╥) in the following chapters you are going to love him more (≧∀≦) best Charakter ever ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~ I'm here too. 19- I really hate the prince more then anything the shit I want tia to either end up with carsein or allendis with a happy ending 20- AND JUST LIKE THAT ALL THE RAGE COMES SURGING BACK TO ME WOW JUST WOW SO, HE DID ALL OF THAT HORRIBLE SHIT BECAUSE HE WAS FUCKING JEALOUS??? (AND I THINK HE ALSO MISINTERPRETED FEELINGS OF LOVE FOR HATRED OR SOME SHIT) DAAAAAAAAAAMN I HATE HIM SO MUUUUUUUUUUUCH!!!!!!!!!!! (past self is who I'm talking about, still uncertain about present self) 21- You know though If we're thinking long term, Carsein is probably going to be the hot, dedicated, protective, serious and mature knight at the rate he's growing as a character. Just thinking about it makes me have brighter hopes for future. Way better than the prince, who'll still look like a prepubescent boy when he's fricking 20+ 22- Gonna wipe from my mind how aggravating watching the prince is And just say Honestly, papa is best boi. Casein is also nice, but papa is just high freaking quality. (not that I ship incest) HA if weed were truly her friend, or even potential bf, that's how he should responded. 23- the prince asks himself what tia thinks of him and as if he would do something that terrible but the reality is that all those horrible things he doubts he would, HE DID THEM ALREADY. He was an asshole, is an asshole, and will always be an asshole. Reading this chapter got me so mad. All he does is scheme and plan without thought for others. Selfish, disgusting. He would make an awful monarch and king. Side note...I don't know why but I increasingly dislike his aide. Every time I see him pop up I just want to skip over the page. His aide is also annoying and disgusting. Stop doubting out Tia and putting her in a bad light on purpose just to relieve you selfish and useless prince 24- You know the only way i can be satisfied with tia to end up with the prince is if the prince from the past life has something awful happen to him something worse then death. That is only when I will be fine with Tia to end up with the present prince. 25- SHIPPING OLYMPICS!!! (observations) [I'm still here for papa and the reader's reactions] They're all terrible, I wish there was a platonic papa ship/ no route. I gotta say tho, looking at the comments below, the author has done a great job with the male choices, since it divided the readers apart (which I think is good in a writer's pov) xD there isn't a truly good one since they all have flaws. well don't mind me, I'm just gonna post the progress chart of my observings, since this is fun to watch: Beginning/ Early chapters: (united hate for the prince_ 1) Papa (+ knights) [Adorable moments] 2) Allendis [kind friend] 3) Carsein [annoying, but still alright] 4) Prince [kill him!!!] 0) Overall, Allendis was a kind childhood friend, and the best choice at this point. Carsein and Prince treats mc as trash. Papa is awesome! Development 1: (everyone except papa is trash) 1) PAPA! [this ship is too strong!] 2) Carsein [he has now become an annoying type of tsundere] 2) Allendis [gah- he is looking a bit shady] 4) Prince [do we still kill him?? he isn't too bad in this life] 0) Overall, the readers hit a bump and grew to dislike allendis, but hey he is still better than the prince, right? Carsein is in the neutral stage. Papa is waayy ahead in the leaderboard tho Development 1.5: (broken ships = present) 1) PAPA!!! [HE IS THE BEST!!!] 2) Carsein [ahhh he is pretty adorable now. Just needs to be a bit more aggressive and take tia ,:3] 3) Prince [we all know he is end game, and he is pretty alright now. Past self still a douche, but current self is... alright and pitiful? Well it seems that the old scar still hurts some people tho] 3) Allendis [oof, lots of ppl reeaally didn't like this weed's shadiness, but a few do?] 0) Overall, Carsein's popularity grew, Prince's unpopularity lessened, Allendis' popularity is steadily decreasing, and papa is still on top!! Personally, Idc who she ends up with anymore, all I care about is that tia and her papa remain happy T^T so I guess i'm pretty neutral with all the male leads ╮(￣▽￣)╭ let's see how this goes I’m glad you pointed this out. As much as I HATE the past prince, he is the past. With all the changes just made in rías new timeline, what’s so hard to believe this prince is different. Still love papa tho. As long they both happy I’m happy (=・ω・=) 26- please stop i dont wanna feel sympathy for the prince he doesn't deserve it Um, sir, u actually HAD done all those shitty things.if not for tia who had... yaoifreak June 14, 2019 11:47 am Um, sir, u actually HAD done all those shitty things.if not for tia who had changed, the past would have repeated itself! 4 reply 22 1 Arcana June 14, 2019 12:14 pm imagine someone telling you them that they saw the future and you did hella bad things. i would find it hard to believe too + probably believe them to be crazy - reply Sachiko June 14, 2019 12:29 pm imagine someone telling you them that they saw the future and you did hella bad things. i would find it hard to believe too + probably believe them to be crazy Arcana So? Her father believed her. The letters weren't left out on purpose for him to discover and he knows that. So what other explanation for her behavior would there be, other than that this is not made up? I'm actually disliking him more now since he's acting just like he did when he KNEW she was afraid of him but pinned the blame on her for acting impertinent. Hate his gross @$$. + reply Arcana June 14, 2019 12:42 pm So? Her father believed her. The letters weren't left out on purpose for him to discover and he knows that. So what other explanation for her behavior would there be, other than that this is not made up? I'm ac... Sachiko The father has a much closer relationship to his daughter, so that can hardly be a comparsion. A chick that is supposed to be your wife, but you hardly know her, tells you that you murdered her and her baby and youre gonna believe her? As a 13 year old or something, however old he is, youre gonna believe her? I would think shes crazy and blame her too. + reply Egglette June 14, 2019 4:58 pm imagine someone telling you them that they saw the future and you did hella bad things. i would find it hard to believe too + probably believe them to be crazy Arcana That’ll be great if he DOES think she’s crazy. Hopefully he’ll be like ‘oooh imma stay away from this weirdo’ at least. It’ll be a happier ending for lil Tia (づ￣ ³￣)づ + reply Oh, father!! Father!!! How nice to have someone w/o any prejudice even to o... LukaKaname June 14, 2019 11:38 am Oh, father!! Father!!! How nice to have someone w/o any prejudice even to our silliness True trust and care to somebody we also trust and care - 0 reply 13 0 Just LEAVE HER ALONE damn prince!!! That betrayal is to harsh to be easily forgiven cookiepookie June 14, 2019 2:49 pm I don't care if he's good or not now. JUST go away!! I don't want to see him. After what happened it's too hard for me to see him in another light (treating her like a shit, forcing her, killing her baby then killing her only family- father and finally her just because he was feeling like it) (︶︿︶)＝凸 go to hell damn jerk. The author is so insensitive to put them back together like nothing happened. Also that makes me dislike the finale for the heroine for not having any self-esteem after what she has gone through AND I'M NOT SAYING SHE ISN'T LOVELY(to be clear)but I'm yet to see what's going to happen so the author better make me reconsider everything by giving me the best plot ever written as to why I should like the prince at all ┑(￣Д ￣)┍ otherwise I'll draw my own version for those like me(and yes I can) - 4 reply 6 9 Sachiko June 14, 2019 12:33 pm If you dislike the heroine for that then you actually love the prince for what he's done, since he's the reason she has low self esteem. Also, low self esteem is irrelevant to whether she gets involved with him again or not. - reply cookiepookie June 14, 2019 2:32 pm If you dislike the heroine for that then you actually love the prince for what he's done, since he's the reason she has low self esteem. Also, low self esteem is irrelevant to whether she gets involved with him... Sachiko No logic in your words. He has done something so horrible and author still will get them back together. The heroine must stupid then. I see no logic in your words saying I like the prince after I wrote that I fucking hate him. He very much irritates me, okay + reply cookiepookie June 14, 2019 2:34 pm If you dislike the heroine for that then you actually love the prince for what he's done, since he's the reason she has low self esteem. Also, low self esteem is irrelevant to whether she gets involved with him... Sachiko Would be so much better if she thought "He is a jerk. I deserve better" + reply cookiepookie June 14, 2019 2:53 pm If you dislike the heroine for that then you actually love the prince for what he's done, since he's the reason she has low self esteem. Also, low self esteem is irrelevant to whether she gets involved with him... Sachiko But if course no! He is a prince! She must be with him whatever happened! (sarcasm) I don't like the very idea for being "forgive everything" person only because he's a main character + reply That dad is the MVP. These kinds of shoujos usually have nice dads, but he... kthp June 14, 2019 11:23 am That dad is the MVP. These kinds of shoujos usually have nice dads, but he is AMAZING. Who needs boys when that’s your father?! 0 reply 20 0 Father of the year ｡･ﾟヾ(✦థ ｪ థ)ﾉ｡ﾟ･｡ Forgot my password June 14, 2019 11:21 am Father of the year ｡･ﾟヾ(✦థ ｪ థ)ﾉ｡ﾟ･｡ I always love to see fandoms burn It's beautiful when a beloved character shows that He's a complete jerk/psycho And it's even more beautiful when you already knew or had a hunch about it. I was patiently wainting for this day, mocking everyone saying "Allen x Aristia for ever! he's the best husband", just waiting... And the comment box today didn't disappoint me at all hahaha

the male lead sano yuuji is like a natural helper to everyone, who doesn't even realize how overpowered he is lol he isn't naive i would say, but rather very humble and regards his power as something strange and useful. he went through quite the harsh miserable experience in his black company, so he finds everything that people suffers from in this fantasy world rather easy compared to the past ( i relate to this somehow ) i really missed how to describe his personality, but i really really like him <3333333 his slimes are worthy mentioning too since they are funny and adorable<3 note: i find the power setting to yuuji very interesting. i would definitely want his power in real life ( very convenient and realistic) + write a story like this