kanwa's manga / #meh(34)

idk i didn't get much vibes, short stories can be good but this one was much too rushed, insufficient buildup and the emotional moments were unfortunately truncated to accommodate the length. overall it would have been an average story if it were expanded a bit and given some breathing space. author-nim's other works are good though!

incredibly poor pacing with lots of holes, generic plot that feels copy-pasted onto flat characters,no character depth or development or meaningful relationship progression. the art and framing also doesn't make up for it's lack of a decent plot. a disappointing read :( and this is just a personal pet peeve, but the names are in english 老師我請求你至少用個韓語名好嗎⋯⋯

I got to the end hoping there would be some logic or character development, but other than the lack of both and the extreme character personality changes...... this shit toxic

just an excuse for porn... I wish the uke hated the seme more, then he could be more resentful and hurt him better, and then the get-together would be all the more sweeter...