Fushi's manga / #fantasy(27)

The story, the characters, the plot (that plot) everything was so beautiful I'm sad that rabbit died, he was really growing on me. PIG IS SUCH A CUTIE I wanna adopt him sm

A bit of a rocky start, got me cryin sobbin and frowin up for peanut and grandma, adorable babies and a sweet ending (i thought it would show jung dying cause he didn't choose to be immortal(or did he?))

First of all, TW: Non-Con for like 1/4 of the whole series. 2nd thing, Rintaro has been treated like he's some kind of property 2x which is kinda iffy.....also, i didn't really get the reasoning behind the 3rd volume's plot like??? Sir you met this guy for like A NIGHT (6 hrs AT BEST) and suddenly he's the love of your life??? That aint no love, it's called a rebound, and the fact that he has this complete disregard of Rintaro being in a committed relationship alr (paired btw) and treating him as if he's a prized possession????? Yeah no. I didn't see the point in any of that. Finally, I thought they'd have a baby or two in the final volume instead of that duel fiasco and the story would focus more on their attendant (renatos??) cause he's the very person that made our main couple meet/reunite/wed but oh well. Sucks for me I guess....

I rate it a 3.5 if I could My few cents: When they first hooked up. The transition between the panels felt off. That's probably due to censorship?? So thats fine. A few plot holes i noticed, when Arin's hidden ability was introduced they said that *anything* she touches turns into stone, and IIRC she touched the apple yiseon restored and nothing happened. I think she also touched yiseon's arm (thanking him for restoring) still nothing happened. But then, when she used her hidden power again. They emphasised on her almost accidentally touching yiseon's arm as if he was gonna turn into stone. But as we've seen in the older chapters, there's no effect. Another thing, when the president was being detained for *homicide*, the cops never bothered to get a search warrant on his phone and he just so conveniently leaks yiseon's secret to progress the plot. Shouldn't he not have access to his phone????? Last thing, when hyeon "nullifies" yiseon's powers and they were both about to die. He suddenly had his powers back??? his penalty takes his powers away, right??? then the dungeon conveniently restores itself?? Even though we saw hyeon take yiseon's away. Anyway, that's all

SWITCH AND WHOLESOME