chicken_veeng's manga / #fantasy(398)

idk maybe its bc they're kids but i don't rly see the point of this story or like the goal bc she kinda mentions one but then she also never talks abt it again. idk i've seen way better manhwas w kids and this is kinda meh. cute for a while but meh

i LOVE the fl ams the duck dad but the ML is lowkey pissing me off a lil. lkke ik hes a child but it just feels like him and fl don’t have any chemistry and he just decided to be possesive over her. ik its bc of the whole leggion thing and how he sees his savior in her and thats why hes possesive but still. i just don’t see it. i would rather they focus on he plot of revenge more bc that part is actually rly good and she has all the resources for that amd her leggion powers could be explored so much more but idk i feel like they keep kimda glossing over those parts and focusing om the ml even tho he kinda just does nothingg

its not bad and kinda entertaining but i don’t thunk its for me. it just keeps ,aking me think of OVR and greatest estate developer and a couple other action manhwas that feel similar that i liked better. idk nothing rly sticks out to me

eh kinda was good kinda sucked ass idk

the story seems good so far w 5 ch in but the translation sucks ass so much idek what i’m reading and i feel like i’m getting dumber

HE IS SO HOT AND THE PLOT IS SO GOOD. I UNDERSTNAD WHY PPL CALL HIM A BOTTOM THATS SUBMISSIVE AND BREEDABLE BC OMG I SEE IT