ritsu's manga / #magic(95)

Last-read-chapter: 15 It okay. I think what’s keeping me from getting into it is the repetitiveness. The MC days the same thing, sometimes in different ways sometimes not, over and over again. He talked about the item he wanted and the PKer in at least 3 different chapters, but it was all the same info. The other thing that throws me off is the excessive thought dialogue. Each and every thought does not need to be presented to the reader. This is especially true during action scenes. The story is generic, though there’s nothing wrong with generic stories, but it’s not as entertaining as it could be due to the issues mentioned above.

Last-read-chapter: 34

Last-read-chapter: 15

Last-read-chapter: 60

last-read-chapter:

Last-Read-Chapter: 35.6