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Uhmmm, its feels kinda weird reading it? The start was really good. When they're just a kid and a guy but then they're suddenly in love so Sooo my thoughts are the story is good, I just think it lacks a bit of development before they actually started their relationship cause the pacing is so fast And it came off as pedophilia to others because of the kiss the moment the met. I think that's where it actually started I mean it would TOTALLY give of different feeling if there's some kind of development in their relationship when the kid came back to japan? Just like the author, I'm still attached to the feeling that the college guy is still a kid so the fact that they're dating is a bit off? Like I hoped the author placed scenes where they lived together and that's where they fall in love 'romantically' cause they actually got to know each other better 'as adults' and not when the other guy is a kid. So the idea came to me is that that the author fell in love with a kid and the kid fell in love with an adult (does that make sense?) some may say that the love the that the author is said is just platonic (i totally get that) but the kiss just imprinted an idea that it is a romantic love and they started the relationship right away so that just gives me a different ides.
Joou to Shitateya