Hmm..I don’t particularly like it so far like no deep delve into the mc’s grief of losing her sisters? Wouldn’t it be better for her to not want to get close or build a real family relationship or having a bit of a toxic need to have a family and want to keep them safe and having her and her new family work to break down her walls. there’s like so many way to it right and this feel a bit lackluster so far,I mean yea the mc’s sisters just died so the gravity of everything might not have set in and there’s a big emotional break coming so I guess I’ll keep reading but if I don’t see the mc going through the stages of grief that will impact the story and help the mc grow as a character imma drop
The Blooming Violet in the Back Garden