Tonari No Kare
Complete | Kinoshita Keiko | 2007 released
It's not that it's badly written but more like we just only reach halfway of the actual story. We just got some development happening on their relationship, and then that's it? We should see how they will together as a couple as a closure
Polaris no Rakuin
Complete | FUJIMURA Ayao | 2013 released
Meh. The story flowed illogically. I couldn't feel kousei hatred nor love, let alone the development of those feelings.
Takaga Koidaro