mwoa's manga / #single dads(2)

The idea was great; 2 single dads with kids became neighbors then fell in love with each other; but the execution was very poor. The dialogue was confusing, the story progression was patchy, the climax was weak (or lack there of), the was barely any resolution thus the awkward ending. Really a waste of nice plot.

The dialogues make more sense and the story was more coherent than Kozure Ookami. Too bad Asahi×Non's arc was too short. It still hadn't been explained what happened to him after he moved out of the house till he got himself a child. Oh also, that accountant was an idiot. I like him for being persistent in pursuing his first love but also hate him so much for leaving his daughter for that. The characters seemed shallow because of that. Once afain, great plot was wasted.