Oboreru Triangle
The overall impression was great; the artwork's wonderful, the narration was easy to follow, the message was clear. Unfortunately for a 6.5 chapter s manga, the story was lacking in content(?) I felt like they underutilized the love triangle conflict which if they developed it really well could actually make a magnificent manga in less than 300 pages. But maybe bcs sensei was aimingvfor more fluffy kind of story, it was sufficient.
Mamanaranai Mon de
The story was GREAT. I like the realistic approach of it; nothing in life will goes according to plan, there will always be twists and surprises. But yhe ending, hiw everyone ended up, was just not satisfying. I root deeply for Chika×Hotaka, but we know that Hotaka himself had no feelings for Chika and only developed so bcs their togetherness. As for Masato, I think they're compatible physically and psychologically so it's easier for their love to bloom. Maybe I'm just dissapointed that there were not much angst and drama, I mean love triangle within childhood bestfriend? That's some beef right there, right?
Pathos