mwoa's manga / #age gap(230)

The pace was rather slow, but it utilized 8 chapters really well that it could relay the intended story without missing any moment

Just like the other commenters said that this had a lot of twists and turns. I genuinely felt relieve when Tatsuya tried to stop his sexual relationship with Haru, after all they're related by blood. Then Haru thought they're just step-brother so I thought ok fine they could get back together. But how (not so) furious I was when Tatsuya found out that they indeed half brothers but he chose to conceal that so that he could continue this damned (but full of love) relationship. Fuck me side ways, I love/hate this topic but the story was delivered beautifully, the artwork was incredible, that it could make me accepted everything that's happening.

Very well narrated. Cohesive and not rushed. Very likable characters, especially the younger one.

The aftertaste was similar to eating a whole loaf of bread: light and fluffy but still makes me full. The stories told were very simplistic, there're no intricate drama or overly bubbly romance. But it carried message that delivered straightforwardly.

Need just a little bit more development. Especially the story between Akira and Yuzuku.

The dialogue flowed better than the other story (Nakajima's arc)