mwoa's manga / #Single Father(11)

The plot was indeed very simple, but the narration was great, has great pace, and it conveyed just enough to build the story; not too much/little it could cause readers confusion

I actually didn't like the characters; too childish to be an adult. But what a charm Botan was! At least the dynamics between the characters was great, the story actually felt coherent and interesting.

Issa fine. Now I'm just editing for Yuuto's arc.

The supposedly chapter 1 was actually chapter 2

It was okay. It's the typical fated mate Alpha X Omega trope. It could do better if only the author build their omegaverse better, set the rules more clearly of what being an A/B/O means. The story relied too much on readers known assumptions of omegaverse.

This was so GREAT!!! And whew I had a hard time trying to remember which characters appeared when in what title. Every characters were interconnected between sensei's works