mwoa's manga / #Police(16)

This webtoon was based from MM romance novel "Frat House Trooper" by Xavier Mayne. The novel itseld imo was a bit (well a lot actually) in terms of story; a lot of unnecessary detailed but lacking in what supposed to have be detailed, unconvincing characters, and mostly the ridiculous plot; but it did overall have a fine story. This webtoon was also not bad, the author was able to capture the necessary storyline. But bcs the original story itself is lacking, the author's decision to omit the last part of the novel ruin the overall impression of the story.This webtoon ended terribly, closed abruptly with inconclusive final sex. There was no closure to what the end of Brandt and Donelly's relationship or to the case. Dissapointed with the story but at least the art was great and the sex was hot. So there's that.

This really had the potential but it decided to let go and end the story hanging halfway. It felt incomplete. We got to see the past of Sudo-san and what might be the motive of Grey/Aruse/Haizaki's thiefing. But no, sensei decided to let us speculate, which might be good in intention, but very lacking in execution. There was no resolution at all, we barely even get to the climax. Another one wasted.

For some unknown reasons, volume 2 got uploaded into separate title "Heavy × Beauty" Dang the story was good. I love the simplicity of storyline; it was direct and focused. The characters were also have logical personality. What lacks maybe is the "old" way of narration (?)

Got a bit wary since everyone said there's a plot twist... it's a pleasant twist for sure And what a befitting look for that talent scout, such a sly fox

Homeboy got a great body, big dick, stable job, cute husband, and a fur baby... lucky son of a bitch...