mwoa's manga / #Childhood Friends(440)

While the artwork was great, the story was all over the place. I can't seem to get the climax of this story; there were just problems after problems but there were no peaks nor tge resolution was satisfying. Everything seemed like just being thrown into the story carelessly to fill the panel. Why that taekwondo hoobae character was needed? Why that photoshot scene was necessary? What this manhwa needs was to focused on one problem that needs to be solved, build the tension around it and then hit climax; the rest of the story could be added as supplementary stories if needed.

Love the 90s manga aesthetic

Short, sweet, but awfully true. And, son, when kissing, worry about cooties, not cavities.