magamaga's manga / #Dragon(13)

First of all the art is lacking in every aspect, there's no detail whatsoever. The story start promising, i even cry because my emphaty toward Erus, but the plot being bad a long the way. The author just want a 'kinky' thing being the main plot and try to make the kinky and taboo thing is something serious. Erus, the uke, the king is so weak, really fitting to be a whore. How can he dreaming having an SM sex with the seme, the dragon, whatever, when his people suffering, there a disaster everywhere, and need him. The serpent right, he is a whore.

I'm sooo dissapointed that Limon is actually an alpha. I prefer that he is a powerful omega and uke on top. Being an omega and get pregnant not make a characters weak. Being an alpha and top not the only way to insert dominant. Imagine a charismatic, powerful, dominant, preggy, omega. Not just an ordinary dominant alpha. Meh. Such a waste. And i realise that this plot similar with smyrna and capri in someway. Just refers the roles. Seriously, i really hate Limon as an Alpha. I really want to see cute Limon as an omega but know how to insert dominant.

To be truth, the way the author write the story kinda awful, like jumping here and there, everything so quickly, and so suddenly. But the idea and the plot is oke. Will read it to the end i guess