While reading thoughts: This story isn’t bad but it’s not good either. There are a lot of inconsistencies in the character development and much more drama than needed in certain situations, the plot also develops too slowly.
After finishing thoughts: it’s not bad but.. had a lot more potential. The ending felt unsatisfying though I did come to like the uke at the end, I can’t say the same about the seme cause that guy still had no development. Basically the author just threw the role of “misunderstood scary looking guy” and that’s his whole personality. (SPOILER AHEAD) Also the death of his brother-in-law and sister was so bad written, like we see no consequences of that in none of the characters, not even THEIR child. Sure the seme got angry and all but that was it.
SPOILER Ch.59: You really want me to believe that the guy who kissed the lei lin from the first episode and forcibly kissed, hugged and touched the uke/MC/lei xi wasn’t in love with the original lei lin? That he wasn’t obsessed with the lei lins? That he wanted to marry her only because they had the same ideals? Oh PLEASE, the author really do be putting up new things and creating plot holes along the way.
NOT spoiler Ch.66-88: The plot only starts to develop around chapter 66 and the whole story has 88 chapters in total, which says A LOT. The end in itself wasn’t exactly rushed but really fast paced. The author could’ve explained things better earlier so it wouldn’t be confusing or even feel like she just explained every single detail in the last minute cause she didn’t want to draw this anymore.
Song of Reverberation