Wow that was really well written. I like the little bit of obsessiveness and possessiveness of both of them toward each other. I wish we could've seen a couple more chapters of them living happily ever after. Although it didn't show Law's answer, we all know it ended happily. I did not see it coming during the whole thing. I kept wondering what it could be? I even thought maybe Law was death or something. The only thing is that the story is very dark and there are not much happiness at all until the end... This would make a great movie.
Moritat