The Devil
WTH was the author thinking turning the FL into some raging bitch dominatrix knight-like female all of a sudden!!!! That just ruined everything. The only thing this MEAN bitch was missing, was black leather and a whip! This story just starts plummeting from then on. Around chapter 56. It was boring torture to get through to chapter 75 after that. And I'm so pissed the way she treats this monster boy who has been by her side loving her and protecting her their whole damn lives!!! So for 50+ chapters she loves him, and he loves her. She misses him like crazy and just wants to live a happy life together. Blah, blah blah...sunshine and rainbow stuff with a couple kids. And then BAM!! Nope she never loved him. In fact she Hates him and wants to kill him!?! She says, He forced her to love him?? What BULLSHIT IS THAT!!!!!!! I don't even want to finish reading this anymore!
Viper
I’Ll Twist The Neck Of A Sweet Dog
There is sooooo much repeated inner dialogue that it's making this story so boring. I mean geeez! We KNOW she loves him! Why must she CONSTANTLY keep saying it over and over and over again. Honestly up until she dies, this story is super boing and repetitive. We hardly see other characters. It's like 75% her and her repetitive thoughts. I hope this gets better now that the stupid naïve love for that bastard is gone.
Can We Become a Family?