The only interesting thing about this story is when the FL has her short dream. The rest is horribly repetitive. It is constantly repeating about the stupid fire. And in a kids way as if we didn't get it the first 5 times of explaing it ALL. I gave it a star for the hot scenes in the dream and another for pretty characters. The rest of the story is so boring. I really hope this picks up.
Feelings In A Dream