Minmotion Syndrome
In debt and Rebellious Alpha Seme x Gangster and Rude Omega Uke [10000000000000000000000000/10] So first, i would like to say that the main reason i liked this story is bc it wasn't like the other stories where the omega is weak and pretty and the alpha is a millionaire CEO that treats badly the omega but helps it, etc. This was the opposite, i mean the roles reversed, and i liked it, it was very refreshing seeing an omega of this caliber. Seo Taeyoon is a very pitiful alpha, he had to go trough a very rough childhood thanks to his drug addict father, that also had to prostitute himself to have food in the table. Even though his father wanted to have him, didn't really know what was having a child and so Taeyoon had to grow up hearing things like "it was better if u didn't born". This changes thanks to Park Jae-in (omega), a debtor that bought him and used him as his "dog" for pure sexual porpuses. At first it could seem like a very distorted relationship, i mean, Taeyoon didn't had a say in there, and Jae-in did whatever he wanted with him, mostly bc he was the only one that could smell his pheromones and that made him interesting for him. Obviously this gradually strats to change, specially thanks to Jae-in showing a lot more of his vulnerability and Taeyoon starting to respect and helping him. At the end they ended with a perfect family, a very lovely family that could heal the scars of their past. Now, the other point i like. Jae-in is a very respectful omega that has inherited a gangster bussiness, he fights and kills if necessary, always resolving everything by his pure hand. Maybe the illegal things he did are seen in a bad way, bc they are, but since it was his only way out to achieve his revenge he had to accept it, there was no other way. Jae-in was very broken, thanks to that Choi guy that had a sick love or obssesion over him, trying to protect him with stupid actions as killing his unborn baby just bc he didn't find an easier way to deal with the situation. And also abandoning him? Like honey even if u didn't want to contact him bc u thought there was going to be more danger, u have cellphones, u could also send a message through that other gangster, there were options, options that u didn't dare to take and that hurt Jae-in in the process. So yeah, Jae-in had to deal with everything by himself, always alone and being hurt in the process. Even if working for u meant to be near u, he had to do it bc he didn't want u to forget about it, something that Choi didn't understand until the end (that dumb btch how tf do u dare to appear and try to claim his new baby with the only person that truly loved him like urs, man that character really pissed me off, and the other secretary Seo something, like those dumb bastards had something in their heads instead of their brains bc what right do u think u have to make them a couple again after all that, after seeing how ur boss made a lot of damage to Jae-in, just bc u liked his clean and beautiful pheromones? Did u really thought that was the way of recovering? With the man who actually took them, made them dissapear? Oh man they were delisuional, really). Anyways, the appearance of Taeyoon in Jae-in's life was perfect. Even though they were broken, even though Taeyoon had a very bad childhood and had to go thruough a trap where he could have hurt his omega teacher, where he had to always retract his alpha characteristics bc of what his dad always said; they could heal with each other pressence. Both of them grow and began to accept their own pasts but also to create a future, a future where both of them could be themselves and finally be happy. That's what i liked because they were each others saviors. Though the relationship began turbulent, it eveloped to a very healthy and one of the greenest relationships i've ever seen. Other things that made me stress (but i liked it) was the situation of Taeyoon. Jae-in made the best decision by telling that teacher and his husband (ex-friend of Jae-in and brother of the other Choi) how awful they are because, being honest, how can u live with yoursefl after seeing how that man lived and had to give up school bc of an incident he didn't even cause. Like, the teacher acts like an angel searching for his other student (we never knew what happened with that one haha) and the husband as if nothing happened after using his father's power to bury that matter and making Taeyoon suffer consequences that weren't even the case, while the real culprits were living the best of their lives (i still have a courage bc they never showed up again so i could see some revenge to them). Still, they were adults and TEACHERS, how would none of those two ever stopped to think and help that little boy, that teenager that was all alone. Thanks Jae-in for saying all that to them, i still want them to apologize to Taeyoon but anyways. Also i wanted to see more of the family situation of Taeyoon, i think for it to be side stories wasn't enough. The fact that Taeyoon is brother with his husband's exteacher and witht the one that made miserable the life of Jae-in was something that could been exploited a lot, specially bc he was the only sane between the three, and bc probably if the other teacher knew would feel guilty, and if the Choi guy knew too would become crazy. The dad was an asshole, the fact that he made Choi the man he is, a monster thanks to all the abuse, makes me be thankful that Taeyoon never put a foot in that house even if his other dad wanted to, he wouldn't be this good and affectionate man we have now. About the bodyguards, they are so cute and funny haha i wanted to see more about them. Specially Sangwook bc that man omg fcking beautiful, with that scar and that gorgeous serious face, and his back and and... so in love with him <3 Anyways, the story is an absolute masterpiece for me. I like when both of the main characters are broken and are looking for a way to get out of that darkness. And always find it with the one that less expected. The family they made, the beautiful Jaeyoon that probably would become a gangster like his papa after taking the gun, the bodyguards that like the uncles of that family, everything is beautiful. Both of them could get back what it was taken for them: a good family, the pheromones, the stability they deserved and, of course, love and happiness. There is no doubt they would do anything for each other, always trying to save the other, even if that means to put theirselves in danger. They are so freaking adorable i really really love them <3<3<3
Gyangu no Kai-kata