The Pizza Delivery Man and The Gold Palace
Like the character drawings. Beginning was too much depressing talk,no action, then after ch30 bamm, action. Uncensored action, good. The only thing is that the blond guy tops the black guy(who was top).Why the quiet blond is the top not the agressive black? Or they should swap. Black guy is chobul, blond is poor. Of course the rich kids attack the softie.omg pissed meoff so much, blond’s dad is a bully and gambler wanted his sons money. Of course blond gave him money then let him hit him then almost killed him. Why is he the top and so strong if he can’t defend himself are u kidding me. Thank god that shit dad is dead. And they don’t fuckin communicate. What kind of relationship is this.
Under the Green Light
So this guy asks the black gangster to be a model for his sculpture. Then they start having sex. The black guy is top but because the brown haired has a big dick he lets him be the top. Bottom gangster wow ridiculous. I didn’t like the brown haired guy because he doesn’t look with glasses, luckily later he doesn’t wear them and looks better, like the green eyes, and gangster has blue eyes. They have a back story,they both grew up in orphanage. Brown was a kid, but gangster was older. And gangster killed the priest because he slapped the kid, then had to disappear. Then ended up in the mafia. The mafia boss gave him drugs,so then he became addicted to drugs and sex addicted. He fucked all the new guys, then the boss fucked him. Anyway, there is a fight going on with gangs and constructions. His boss wants him back but he is already a boss gangster. First they drug the brown hair guy, then black guy has sex with him although almost is strangled by brown.then black is drugged, and they have sex again from drugs, then brown drugs him so he doesn’t want to let him go because he would be in danger. Anyway then at the end they are almost by ex boss, i dunno if boss died in the fire, then happy ending. It was too much gangster stuff going on. Too much drugs, not healthy relationship. They like each other but almost kill each other kinda thing. They should just talk it out not run away all the time and fight people.
The Boundary of Delusion
Ch 3 Blond and bottom are fuck buddies the last ten years. Bottom finds a rich guy but he is too nice in bed so he asks his friend to help, so they have threesome. Bottom is masochist. Black guy is a chaebol and was straight before. But he likes the bottom so I guess he is fine with him. the threesome was so sexy, love the dominant blond wow. So blond dreams about black so he blackmails him, if he bottoms for him he leaves the slutty bottom alone. Black has a hard time bottoming, then they meet up again. Blond is obsessed with black but black hates him. Still its so sexy.
Rivalry
This handsome top guy sees a new guy and falls for him. Brown guy is a slut sleeping with all the girls. But he sees the blushing blond and says hey do u wanna have sex..so top is thinking yeah..so they go to the hotel and top has to be the bottom, he is in pain so he has to leave..and after this he still chases him..how can he be so stupid,like u are handsome and top and want to be bottom? And he has a fuckin handsome childhood friend who is bottom..oh but they had sex once drunk and black guy likes him while being spa slut..why not just tell your feelings? Oh yeah because blond has a tendency to fall in love at first sight..oh yeah and black guy has a younger friend who is in love with him but he is not a psycho and tells him to fuck off. Oh because dark guy has no emotions so he was still fucked girl after going on date with bottom. Honestly i hate the dark guy, bottom is just crying his eyes out while oh he thinks he has feelings for bottom now that he has been told to fuck off..they even went to the beach and sex..then dark oh it was just sex..then this bully tries to stab dark and blond goes before him so he is stabbed and dark loses it. So then they are boyfriends now but wait dark is not even feeling guilty because he was a slut..just leave him.. I wish blond would go out with black and blond stayed top, he is not cut out to be bottom..why not the dark tries to be bottom and he will see it fuckin hurts. I am not even interested to continue to read, I dont want black to get together with his younger friend who he grew up with.. The story is enough at ch30 then the same thing happens all over, dark guy doesn’t know emotions so bottom is always pissed at him because he is too honest, like he cheated on him before and stuff. Not gonna read all, it was an average story. And don’t get why all guy almost look the same, like draw them more differently.
Define The Relationship
So this alpha guy is on the street, almost midnight for new years. This other alpha just comes to him and kisses him, then they lost each other. Black alpha is a chaebol and has responsibilities and he will need to marry an omega to have a kid. Anyway black alpha is typical alpha, he has to do it with an omega from time to time, but i guess for safety he always had different guy. Then this doctor tells him maybe u could try have sex with an alpha because he didnt cum. So his bro's partner introduces him to this handsome one eye blue, one eye grey guy. So blue eye is quite experienced..and they meet up for dates and then sex. I didn't like that blue guy was portrayed as such a player and when kept reminding black that they are not in a relationship and he will one day be with another alpha..so the cold black alpha starts to smile and fall in love with blue..and blue is so nice to him,like when on date..like they r really in a relationship. then when black would admit his feelings he hears blue saying to his colleagues that they r nothing..then one month goes by and just then blue starts to realise he is in love..black almost gets engaged. blue just appears in front of him with a smile..i wanted to punch him in the face..couldnt he have a sad or crying face instead? Anyway they get back together. then again black can't communicate and finally he moves to blue..like can't u say u want to live together..then blue has his rut and he gets crazy..I mean he was nice and caring when they had sex but this time he was like a sadist,he didnt listen to him and just kept having sex..like dont u get it black is not an omega,he is alpha like him. Anyway it was an okay story,sex scenes were okay, sometimes was bit boring and too long just because they didnt communicate they prolonged the story. I didnt like that all the guys drawing looked similar,like the two main almost looks the same just one has one blue eye..is it so hard to draw different colors? Don’t like the side story either. Whats the point to include bdsm now..oh he black needs to be punished because he is hiding something so blue forces him into a sex shop to choose thing then when at home he slaps his bum and then black says oh i wanted to propose to you,happy ending.. i dunno I don’t like that black alpha turned really into an omega always crying at sex because blue always teases him and blue is not as innocent as was thought..anyway could have been better with two dominant alphas and healthier relationship.
Dawn of the Dragon
Ch 28,44,68 So this rich family is under the dragon’s protection but the dragon doesn’t want to help them or something. The dragon is waiting for his mate from this family to reincarnate. The family wants to marry of their daughter but the son wants to talk to the dragon instead. So he moves to his place. They start living together then of course sex..the sex is uncensored which is finally nice to see..some positions are repetative but okay. Anyway dragos gets sick and blue goes to see another dragon for help and falls of a clip. They both then remember their previous life. Here the story is a bit icky because noone raised the dragon and he was abused by the village as a child. Blue was the emperors brother or something. Of course the emperor was in love with him and wanted to keep him next to him bit he run away..thats when he met the dragon who vanished the village people. They lived as father and son..then dragon wished to big bigger then blue and turned into an adult then he was in a rut and they had sex..anyway the emperor kidnapped blue than dragon found him and the emperors men then killed blue. Anyway they got their memories back but blue was on the verge of death so after he came back didn’t remember the dragon so had to start dating again basically. Then they got married, happy end. The only thing I didn’t like that the dragon was a kid raised bupy blue in first life..and dragon callimg him sir all the time. Otherwise both guys are hot,and blue is bottom but stayed dominant, they are equals, its the dragon who is a crybaby..cute, sexy story. They are a bit too buff for my liking but okay.
Onward
Ch 20,27,37,39,42,43 So these two guys meet on the street after one bumping into the other he drops his phone, black tells him to message him when he gets the money. Blond ends up being black’s housekeeper. Black had a traumatic past and has sex with lots and he is the top. Anyway black likes blond because he looks sexy..he sees his abs because he swims and exercises a lot..so slowly they end up having sex although blond was not gay. Black is bottom with him. About black: he wanted to be an idol but some big old guy molested him so he couldn’t and still has nightmares, he drinks a lot and then has sex.. blond is a swimmer, going into the olympics, we saw his family,younger sister and bro..and black bought clothes for them too. Black invested into a cloth brand year ago and now doing well so he doesn’t have to work. He met this older ceo guy but turned out they can’t have sex because both wanted to top but they stayed sorta friends and he gave him money to invest. Now ceo guy has an entertaining company and he sponsors blond guy. We saw blacks other friend who became idol,pink hair guy. And another guy turned up who looks similar to blond but green eyes,,he knows black from school..and wants black to go out with him although he married I think..otherwise he blackmails him. About the art, its okay, sometimes gets worse, sex scenes could be longer and more detailed,its censored so annoying but even the two uncensored chapters were strange,dicks looked strange..and didn’t even see blonds elephant.. Oh okay so green guy didn’t get married,and black told him nothing will happen. Poor blond heard it,all these guys appearing around black..blond is 20, black 26 so he feels like a child.okay the sex scenes getting better, uncensored yay ,they draw blacks bum very lumptious. Okay this multi orgasm is..not realistic..why u drawing chibi version while sex omg.. Okay so the old guy didn’t rape him because he cut him with a glass,thank god. But blacks first bottoming was with green eyes so he didn’t like that. But he feels safe with blond,good. Anyway of course there was a big scandal online about blond being gay..they didn’t want him to win olympics because they sponsored other guys..but the plan didn’t work because blond didn’t care if people knew. And then scandel broke out about the old guy too so blacks things were sorted. Happy endig with blond,love love. Although I would have wanted black to go be being idol.. Then we see the other couples, ceo guy and pink idol boy. The idol groups agency didn’t do well so they needed a new entertainment compnay..and pink said he wants ceo to sponsor him..he didn’t know what that means..but ceo agreed and they slowly had sex..its freaking annoying that pink is drawn as a bunny..I don’t like the chibis while sex..its not sexy. Of course it was pinks first kiss, sex..and he enjoyed it?its not realistic. Ceo guy is little pedo..like pink is so childish..why choose him.,ceo guy was a jiu juitsu athlete too like the swimmer..so sport athletes plus idol couples. So ceo is so big and pink so tiny and he put his elephant into him..little bit grooming..okay he knew pink when he was 17 and was singing on the streets..such unrequited love..okay they r together I don’t think need to read more, i dunno why we would need more story..first half story was censored then not..i dunno which was better..these dick drawings were strange. I liked the black top then bottom guys drawing the best, he really looked cool,like an idol delinquent. I liked the ceo bit too,just not the grooming. Like the black groomed the swimmer boy and ceo the idol..i dunno..and ceo and black was too close to each other..like they were both tops but black could’ve changed his mind then..and now only friends little strange..don’t like it.just don’t keep in touch. 15-05-2025
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