Moira22's manga / #Strong female lead(15)

Something was missing, the story writing not the best. Dialogues were boring it is offical translation and still shit. The couple is cute. Fl is beautiful and strong character,ml is the cool character,he could have been more interesting..he just wants her body,but they don’t show the intimate parts,kissing is not drawed too good either. It has a lot of gaps,why they wrote it like that. Fl has a brother and sister,sister is the innocent type,she is a bitch,brother is my fav so sexy and killer. Sister is a killer at the end too, they could have been a happier family if Fl raised her like her brother. The other bitch got what she deserved, the prince guy was so clueless,it was hard to watch.Fl could have been the empress but ml didn’t want to be in the palace..anyway she is rich she can do whatever. After the story ended I dont caree about the kids. It was an okay story but if the writing would have been better I could have enjoyed it more, drawing was okay. Character designs were the only positive point. I want her to see act a bit more villainess in this crazy family. Ml said it was love at first sight,it took 40 chapters for them to get together thats half the story. And it was too easy. The accountant guy would deserved a slap. I didn’t like the nun, she was annoying. King was annoying too. And why include the dragon then it disappears? And the ml is till the captain instead of staying with his loving wife? Whay he needs to go away all the time, they meet one time and she gets pregnant again..whaat.

8 Love the story and couple. Don’t like the age gap only. Side stories were not my fav.. especially the two knights’s dates, are they together or not? Sir Robert deserves his story too.

rushed ending,lots of gaps left. We didn’t get answers. But I liked the story. She is comparing the past when in this life she has this handsome prince.Why is still calling them her pupils when they are adults and she loves the prince.Ml calling her master its a no no. Be more romantic both…she had to propose omg no. Ml be a man,if he can be as emperor he should be with her too, like stronger.She is not his mom. Her brother is so handsome too. Lukily drawing improved, beginning was inconsistent.

The emperor girl is an cold character, not enough romance with the handsome magician guy only at the end

7 Art is okay, but don’t like the buff shoulders, his body is much bigger compared to his head. Fl’s fiance cheats on her. She finds this shy duke and they start dating, of course they like each other. I like that she was a pushover and now she is stronger, but ml is way too soft. His family is assholes and he is the good boy, he went to war,killed but he can’t say no..little bullshit. Hope to see him get stronger emotionally. Fl is filthy rich so she will help him get the dukedom. Her family is at least nice, bro has sis complex but not too unhealthy. Onky annoying is that they dress ml in pink ribbon and necklace..why make every guy gay in these drawings. Ans his shirt is too revealing. I like the drawing of the bitch fiance, she looks villainess with black hair. The bitch guy is a slut. Hooe they cut his hand off. For now okay,not too exciting but fl is nice.