Unmei no Tsugai ga Omae da Nante
this was....so underwhelming. i could say more but that almost feels like a waste of my time. lol it sounds like i hated it but i didnt i just left the story feeling unsatisfied and kinda bored. but not enough to quit the story mid way. just seems like ti didnt do anything interesting with its omegaverse premise, the love story isnt very romantic or angsty or charming. the bickering isnt rly all that clever or funny. the comedy itself is just very broad. the art is fine and the sex scenes are also fine, not esp erotic but fairly naughty. its too long to be a quick smutty read before bed but doesnt use its length to tell any kind of compelling story. the fact that it ends without either marking, marriage, babies or some other kind of Commitment (and the love making scene is weirdly short and inconsequential despite all the build up to it?). at the end im still not entirely convinced that the alpha is esp invested in the omega and thats a shame. in the end not bad enough to give it 1 star but not enjoyable enough to give it more than 2 (and also their hatred is based on almost nothing, and again doesnt even use that pettiness to be actually funny) there's a better version of this story that ive read elsewhere.
He Knows What I Do After Dark
light. silly. forgettable. as in i already forgot what happens for most of the story. i should prob fix that at some point.....anyway its fine! (as always the central premise is so patently silly yet not funny enough to justify its use so that alrdy kinda KOs most of my emotional connection to it but the real question is, is it smutty and fun? yes, yes it was....i think)
You Make It Too Easy